My favorite character is Old Major. He is
the one that start the whole revolution with a speech. He is respected by
others because he is the oldest animal living in the farm. He is presented as leader.
Everyone wants to hear what he has to say, when he has to say it. He also has a
very strong impact in the other animal’s life. He is the most respected animal
in the farm, which means everything he says has to be done.
He is my favorite character because he
knows how to influence others. He knows what is going to make animals life in a
better place. He knows what is good and what is not. He is well experienced and
he is a great leader. I think of myself as a leader and that is why I can
relate to him. I want to do things right and he also wants to do things right
even though he is about to die.
This is clear work and you have addressed the requirements of the task. The information you have inferred about this character and the personal connection you have drawn are interesting. Good start.
ResponderEliminarIn your subsequent posts, start to use your analytical skills to go beyond surface statements and think about what the characters represent in terms of the allegory.
Language notes: You must use basic tenses correctly. "He...start the revolution" is not acceptable; such basic errors will cost you points on your grade. Also, revise the position of the apostrophe for plural possessives; "a strong impact on the other animals' lives".